The Hidden Blade Assassin's Creed in Depth

so........anyone wanna,i dunno say how much it sucks.... orr,how awesome it is....

JUST SAY SOMETHING

It keeps being updated, so I'll read it when it's finished. I can't focus on an entire story in portions. I forget key points. That's my reasoning.

thank you!! i feel better

I've read one or two chapters. I'm not into fan fiction so it's hard for me to stay focused long enough to read even a short story.

What I liked about your work is that you introduced new characters and situations. You didn't just rehash things you saw in a game. Your use of Italian words was a nice touch.

The thing you need to work on are the mechanics: spelling, punctuation, capitalization, etc. People won't be able to enjoy your stories if they can't comprehend the sentences.

The good news is that you're in a perfect position to learn these things. Pay attention in English classes, especially when it comes to writing! They're giving you an education in the fundamental skills you will need for writing comic books.

Well thank you stabguy, and i do paY attention in english. just that the teacher makes us read novels more than we do acttual writing...it sucks.

EA, visual artists usually copy paintings of the masters in order to learn their techniques; it's standard instruction. At pretty much any art museum, you're likely to see at least a couple of people doing just that.

It's the same with writing. If you read good writing, you will learn what good writing is. That's why the teacher is giving you reading assignments. Sure, actual writing assignments would help; also it might help if your teacher explained the reasoning as well! (I remember wondering when I was just your age: "why are we learning this?" They rarely answered.)

If your teacher doesn't cover the topic "why is this good writing?" in class discussions of the novel, perhaps you could ask. Teachers generally like those kinds of questions.

Another piece of advice (which is worth exactly as much as you are paying for it haha) is to read the essay "Politics and the English Language" by George Orwell. It's extremely helpful for understanding political speech, but also for English language in general; how it is used and mis-used.

That's how I started drawing when I was little. I took comics lying around and found splash pages (full page shots instead of individual panels) and traced them. After a while, I would just look at pictures and copy them from there. Eventually, I could do my own thing, but as a result, my style was blending each artist's skills into one. That's just how you learn stuff like that.

same..except i went off of memory.

Well i posted some new stuff on deviant art. one i didn't really care about.. http://ezioaltair56.deviantart.com/#/d4m8tno if you read the comment you know what im getting to. That guy might have seemed like an a$$. But i guess thats costructive critcism,eh.

Anyway,Heres the christopher i did spent some time on and is the one im somewhat proud of.

http://ezioaltair56.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4m8sxz

Got your back.

LMAO joey.

Lets see him hate on this...

http://ezioaltair56.deviantart.com/#/d4mcwh7

nice details on the body, but what's going on with the face?

Assassin's Creed devotion is done. So what did you think?.

Assassin's Creed Century 21

Chapter 1.
Chapter 2 Pt.1
Chapter 2 Pt.2